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Pressed against your neck in a gentle embrace,
My thirst arises like a beast inside me,
I can feel your veins pulsing against my lips,
Your lifeblood flowing inside them, just out of reach.

I pull back, slowly, to gaze into your eyes,
And smile, for I know how mine must appear,
Black as coal, but you do not flinch, nor look away,
Nor do you show any slight sign of fear.

My hands slide up, your cheeks fitting into my palms,
As if they were made especially for me to hold,
My mouth presses tenderly against yours,
And I apologise silently for my eternal cold.

I feel your fingers, entertwining lustfully with my hair,
As I fight my own kind of lust, deep within the soul,
Now that I can taste your sweet lips, dangerously close,
I must pry you away, before I lose control.

But even as you lie, head against my chest,
The hunger subsides; I inhale, as if I could actually breathe,
And hold you close, promising in a whisper:
"My Bella, I'll never hurt thee."
©2008-2010 *SoulAgainstSoul
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Hmm...

Um, yes. Edward Cullen and Bella Swan (c) Stephenie Meyer.

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:iconwhite-fang-demon:
Well you already know that I love it but I will say it again, I LOVE IT! I wish i had talents like u... it isnt fair T_T

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"I am so clumsy I am almost disabled!"

"What do u mean I'm a vampire?.... OH great now I can kill people AND eat them..."

"They shall taste oblivion, which tastes like red bull... which is disgusting" -Red Vs Blue
:iconsoulagainstsoul:
Awh, but you do.. You just don't realise it. But I know you do. And thanks again ^_^ You made me confident enough to post it and even enter it in the competition :D

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日本がだいすきですよ。 :D

"Where did they put that apostrophe?! I'm grammatically outraged!" - Tim Minchin
(See, I'm not the only Grammar Nazi!)
:iconwhite-fang-demon:
Thats good! I would have had to smack u if u hadnt entered it

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"I am so clumsy I am almost disabled!"

"What do u mean I'm a vampire?.... OH great now I can kill people AND eat them..."

"They shall taste oblivion, which tastes like red bull... which is disgusting" -Red Vs Blue
:iconsoulagainstsoul:
Awh. I would've written another one if I hadn't of entered it.
Perhaps I should've anyway... Just in case.

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日本がだいすきですよ。 :D

"Where did they put that apostrophe?! I'm grammatically outraged!" - Tim Minchin
(See, I'm not the only Grammar Nazi!)
:iconwhite-fang-demon:
NO! I am in love with that poem! I intend upon marrying it XD

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"I am so clumsy I am almost disabled!"

"What do u mean I'm a vampire?.... OH great now I can kill people AND eat them..."

"They shall taste oblivion, which tastes like red bull... which is disgusting" -Red Vs Blue
:iconsoulagainstsoul:
x] Err well... congratulations? Have you picked a maid of honor yet? *Cough cough*

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日本がだいすきですよ。 :D

"Where did they put that apostrophe?! I'm grammatically outraged!" - Tim Minchin
(See, I'm not the only Grammar Nazi!)
:iconsoulagainstsoul:
Thankyou =]

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日本がだいすきですよ。 :D

"Where did they put that apostrophe?! I'm grammatically outraged!" - Tim Minchin
(See, I'm not the only Grammar Nazi!)
:iconwhite-fang-demon:
U are the maid of honor of course! and u dont even have to wear a dress! I am marrying it in Las Vegas!

--
"I am so clumsy I am almost disabled!"

"What do u mean I'm a vampire?.... OH great now I can kill people AND eat them..."

"They shall taste oblivion, which tastes like red bull... which is disgusting" -Red Vs Blue
:iconsoulagainstsoul:
SWEET! I'll wear a tuxedo.
Or jeans and a tank top, haven't quite decided yet.

--
日本がだいすきですよ。 :D

"Where did they put that apostrophe?! I'm grammatically outraged!" - Tim Minchin
(See, I'm not the only Grammar Nazi!)

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